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We had an apartment in the city,
Me and Loretta liked living there.
Well, it'd been years since the kids had grown,
A life of their own left us alone.
John and Linda live in Omaha,
And Joe is somewhere on the road.
We lost Davy in the Korean war,
And I still don't know what for, don't matter anymore.

(John Prine - 1st verse of Hello in There)

 

Lesson 1: write what you know

  • You must write!
  • Use automatic writing to unblock or "create the kernel"
  • Whilst writing what you know is a good thing, you cannot assume that just because it happened the reader will believe it happened. The writing needs authenticating detail - specificity
  • Learn to observe - observe in words the way a photographer might observe visually
  • Use things that stand out
  • Use your imagination to augment authentic details
  • Look beyond the obvious
  • Use documents and diaries for authentic source material
  • Look up words you don't know
  • Use a notebook to record experiences or observations

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